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Post by Aryss on Nov 26, 2007 11:09:16 GMT -5
Last time I asked Ellie to delete my thread, because I decided to redo it. I changed a few things in the plot, characters and such and hopefully it's better this time! I've also got visuals It turned out 3 pages longer than the first one,so I'm feeling better about it. I started a blog for it. Here's chapter one. banishfanfic.blogspot.com/ (chapter 2 is on the way!) Leave a comment. They are most welcome! Disclaimer: I do not own any Anita Blake characters. They are (c) Laurell K. Hamilton Toby Hemingway, Chace Crawford, Taylor Kitsch and Steven Strait (c) themselves. Victoria LaCroix, her parents (c) me. Visuals: Pictures of Victoria and Anita for now ;D Victoria: Anita:
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Post by Ellie on Nov 29, 2007 7:53:54 GMT -5
Aryss, I liked it!!! It was better the second time I read it- can't wait for the follow-up Very well done, chica!! We sure love making our Toby the resident bad-ass, Lol!! ;D
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Post by Aryss on Nov 29, 2007 12:05:42 GMT -5
Thank you! Chapter two will be done by the weekend, and it will be interesting! I can assure you. And yea, there is no other way to put Toby xD
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April
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Post by April on Nov 29, 2007 23:11:18 GMT -5
While I agree that Toby may be some-what of a badass in real life...I don't think he's as much of a jerk as Reid can be. I know when I wrote him, I tried to separate him from his character. He didn't come off so arrogant from what I remember about his MySpace too. I remember one of his friends asked him about the Reid profile that was created when the The Covenant came out. And Toby told his friend that the profile didn't have anything to do with him. He said...and I'm quoting him: "I'm not that much of a c*nt."
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Post by Ellie on Nov 30, 2007 8:57:19 GMT -5
LoL...yeah, I can see that. Reid's the firey smart-ass that likes control and Toby's, well...Toby! I love to imagine him as you portray him in your fic, April
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Post by Aryss on Nov 30, 2007 12:04:56 GMT -5
Now,now girls. This is only chapter one. He's not going to act like an arrogant jerk all the time. You shall see. I'm giving him a phobia that will allow Victoria to see past his 'act' and step by step Toby will reveal his feelings for her. I'm also giving him competition. ;D Oh, the ideas are piling up!
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Post by April on Nov 30, 2007 12:59:49 GMT -5
Awwwww, thanks Ellie. That means a lot to me. *blush* Oh, I wanted to ask you...how far have you gotten in Prelude? Oooh, a phobia? I want to read that. I'm curious to see how you develop his character.
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Post by Aryss on Nov 30, 2007 13:56:11 GMT -5
Chapter 2: aryssreaper.livejournal.com/1569.htmlDisclaimer: I do not own any Anita Blake characters. They are (c) Laurell K. Hamilton Toby Hemingway, Chace Crawford, Taylor Kitsch and Steven Strait (c) themselves. Victoria LaCroix, Tristan LaCroix (c) me. It's giving me a headache, that's for sure, because I never really put myself down to write longer stories. I really hope you guys like it. But, it's worth it, non the less. This part is shorter, introducing a few more characters and slowly building up for the upcoming two large chapters. April, here's a hint for you. Chapter 4 will have...well, hot, wild, kinky sex in it, lol. ;D
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Post by Aryss on Nov 30, 2007 14:06:42 GMT -5
Visuals: (I spent ages looking ._. ) Jason: Richard: Nathaniel: I wanted to keep him as a surprise, but since Tristan got a little part now, here's his picture:
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Post by April on Nov 30, 2007 17:26:24 GMT -5
You know I'm looking forward to that.
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Post by Maggie[Kitsch]-I<3SaLtImBaNcO on Dec 29, 2007 20:05:08 GMT -5
Ahhh....Tis my Fair Tristan!!! he's sooo gorgeous...kind of reminds me of Taylor Kitsch and Adam Copeland!!!
CHEERS! = ]]
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